Almost, Tim. Won't argue with the main points: People definitely matter more than money. Time is the ultimate asset, to be used wisely experiencing relationships with the ones you love. Don't be possessed by money. Take care of your health.
Being privileged white males, we have the luxury of time - time to think, compose a piece of writing and utilize our resources to make sure it gets distributed and read...
Some folks living in the Walmart parking lot in a van with the whole family, or in a homeless shelter, or otherwise below the poverty line cannot see the point of this article. I know that isn't your target audience. But I often wonder after reading your writing - who is your reader, exactly?
I know I am. And I mostly agree with much if what you say. Thanks for that.